Sample 2 has many different arguments and most of them are very general. They have also used a very specific example to support their idea.
They have stated this very clearly in the first sentence and then explained why this is, in the second sentence. Sample 1 has one main argument- parents prefer grandparents because they trust them. Finally, grandparents have lots of experience taking care of children because they are old and looked after children for many years themselves. Also, the children really love their grandparents and feel comfortable with them. Grandparents really love their grandchildren and would never harm them. Sample 2– Grandparents are the best people to look after children for very obvious reasons. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 62% of working mothers prefer a member of the immediate family to provide care when they are at work. In other words, they do not trust a stranger to look after their child and feel confident that no harm will come to the child whilst being looked after by grandma or grandpa. Sample 1– Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their children with grandparents when they are at work because they feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family circle. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.ĭiscuss both views and give your opinion. Question- Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Which one is a good essay and which one is not?
Look the following examples and think about what the examiner wants.
If we look at the public band descriptors or my guide on the difference between band 5 and band 8 answers you can see that the examiner wants you to respond to the question with ‘ relevant, extended and supported ideas.’ This means that your ideas must actually relate, or be linked, specifically to the question and then you have to explain what your ideas mean and then support them with examples.
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